Tuesday, 26 January 2016


 Last Walk of an Unknown Hero




Here Is the Six oclock News.The words reverberated in his brain and the picture of the Houses of Parliament beside the Thames appeared, just before the newsreader gave a thin smile into the camera.

     He sat upright in his chair as he heard the broadcast, a habit from whenever authority spoke, a half empty bottle in his hand. The thoughts that kept him awake or had awakened him from sleep these past few days, still hung on his body like a dull, dense mist. The news programmes had never affected him that much, until now. The house, the goods, and everything he'd laboured for seemed to strangle him now with the weight of a millstone. The pain of failure worse than any physical injury he'd ever suffered. Drink had never played much of a part in his life before, army discipline saw to that. But he'd heard it said beer could drown the hurt inside his gut and deaden the endless question.

     “Why?

     The voice inside the box faded into drunken stupor as his frame slumped back down into the crumpled cushions beneath him.

     “The Prime Minister has insisted that the Working Age Directive is necessary to allow young people who are out of work, to find work. The last three words were emphasized. Members of the House recognise the need to introduce compulsory retirement at 55...

     He could barely register the words as they moved through the darkening haze, enveloping his thoughts. He wrapped his fingers around the neck of the bottle again and lifted it towards his mouth, closed his eyes and poured the stale liquid down his throat. The TV panel began to discuss the pros and cons of a decision to regulate working ages so that teens, and those in their early twenties, could be employed. Through half closed eyes, he could just see that his room was a mess and, for the first time in his life, he couldn't have cared less.
Bastards.
 All through his national service, tidiness had been a habit. All through his working life, attention to detail had been his trade mark. He flung the bottle across the room, hitting the wall and smashing into a thousand pieces, leaving a stain that crept like cancer across the carpet. Eventually, sleep came to rescue him from the living nightmare, but not the one in his dream, which one had reoccurred over the last few weeks, ever since the newspapers began to carry editorials about the government plans to reorganize labour.

     London's burning...all of it.

     In the midst of a crimson sky, the horizon was being obliterated by black smoke as the voluminous flames rose from the dome of St Paul's Cathedral. It seemed as if the devil's fingers had wrapped themselves around the stars and snuffed out the light from the moon. Dawn had not even broken yet, so flames appeared to rise up from the depths of Hell itself. Sirens split the morning wide open as engines sped to points all around the capital, too many to cover, the crews prioritizing their targets as the riots spread from location to location. Red flashing lights atop the stationary wagons mirrored the frenetic activity of the operators on the ground, as flumes of water were sprayed madly upwards towards the burning embers of Downing Street.  The political and financial centres of the world's economic hub were collapsing It was useless, every rooftop had buckled, metal frames were melting and burning pieces of paper were falling to earth.

     The fires spread. The whole of the city must have been alight by now and what would have been dawn on any other day was now as dark as midnight. Across the city the fires rampaged, jumping from street to street and catching hold of any piece of timber not battened down. The gale-force winds twisted the smoke into huge pillars of black, acrid poison that lifted anything in its path aside and hurled it into oblivion. Even girders were wrenched from the debris of the collapsed houses. In a final assault on everything that had been built through the centuries, London, the city of his birth, the city of the proud and skilled craftsman, was being dismantled by accountants, solicitors, career politicians and the local people, and reduced to rubble. It was like a nightmare from the war.

Last Day..


     His door opened. He stood motionless for a moment, his small wiry frame hadn't changed much since the army days. But, an old manall of a sudden, he stepped out into the street and took a look along the road, his eyes straining now to recognise the long blurred memories of a distant childhood. Growing up amongst the entryways and alleyways of a once-friendly community, he struggled to retain a glimpse of the faces from a past long gone. There were no tears, just an empty stare from eyes that had lost all spark of energy, all sense of life. In one last farewell to happier times his hands moved up to the green army beret on his head, a habit he'd kept from the war, smartness, tidiness, a sense of pride: Thats what he conveyed. In a rote action he tilted it to one side and smoothed it over his forehead, allowing himself one last look, then took his first step to his last walk. Newspaper pages, crumpled with yesterday's tragedies, blew like tumble weeds along the avenue between the terraced houses, now littered with broken glass and decorated with boarded-up doorways. Even the graffiti painted on the grime covered walls wasn't there for any artistic statement, but a comment on the decline of a once-proud nation. Weeds grew up through the pavement and fought for territory with the mattresses and old cookers rotting and rusting in front of doors dangling on just a hinge, barely upright.

     He turned left. Either direction would take him to his work place; it was a habit he'd followed since joining the firm as a youth. The wind, normally chilled this time of year, smelled of decaying history. He hunched his shoulders a little higher and turned the coat lapels up to offer some protection against the cold. A working man's steps took him briskly past his youth. The places where he and his pals had sat in the gutter pulling at the pebbles torn loose from the road were freshly tarmacked over, and cars parked at the kerbside meant street football had died many years before. Here were the stadiums where the ball had sailed into the top corner of an imaginary net on an imaginary football ground, the shot taken by a real boy. But youth had gone now, replaced by empty houses and broken dreams. Ahead, he saw the shelter where he'd caught the bus every morning of his working life, remembering that it was more than a stop off. It had been a meeting point of mates and colleagues all employed in a skilled profession, the manufacture of engines that ran the economic growth of post-war England. No more, though. The old manrecognised few of the faces now, his mates had been replaced by shadows of teenage snarls, cigarettes hanging from their mouths and gadgets blasting out the latest praise of thuggery and violence. With their hands in their pockets and hoods pulled over their heads, he didn't recognise their world, the world of gimme.His arrival was invisible, no one nodded a welcome. He was just an old manin their world, in their eyes. As the bus approached, time stood still for all of them, grotesque statues of indifference and indolence, working only to fuel their weekend beer habit, only as a condition of keeping their benefit money. Ever since that announcement on the television he felt forced into the ignominy of joining them.

     As the wooden doors swung open into the workshop, he realised he loved it here, always had. Walking through those doors meant he was somebody; he was a skilled man amongst other skilled men. The clean lines of the bays, the quiet lull that preceded the day's activity, came always with the promise of machines stirring to life. Those sounds, that energy had kept him going through the birth of his sons and the death of his wife. Still, the thought of that death bit deep into his soul, six months of hell in an empty house, his sons too far away to help, not that he'd have asked for it anyway.



Frank.The call of his name brought him back.

He turned. The foreman was at his side, a small, slightly stooped man, just a little older than himself.

Frank, go up to the office, they need to talk to you.” He’d heard the words many times over the years, but they’d been delivered with a smile, some young management recruit would have screwed up a time sheet, or a drawing of a machine cast and needed an expert to help sort it out. Not this time. This time his foreman couldn’t bring himself to look into his eyes.

     He barely heard the words, even though he'd not yet fired up his machine. This time though, he knew it was something entirely different.

Mr. Davies to the manager's office.The secretary's voice cut through the air from speakers above his head and echoed around the factory walls. Fleetingly the image of that same secretary came to him. When she walked past the bays he'd never disrespected her, never whistled or made lewd remarks like some of the men. She could have been the same age as some of their daughters. Yet here she was announcing his demise to the whole factory.

     As he walked past the numbered work bays the familiar sounds of his engineering life began to mix together and shatter the numbed silence. The siren for the start of the day came like the air raid sirens hes heard on duty in 1940. But this wasnt 1940. This was 1968. Like a highly-orchestrated  symphony the high pitched squeal of turning machines and deep gashing growl of planes gouging slots into metal beds was music most familiar. He grimaced as the sparks flew from grinding machines being worked to within thousandths of an inch. For all his working years, from apprentice to skilled man, he'd loved the sight and sound of this walk through the factory. For all these years it had defined him, meant he was somebody. But not today. Today, nobody caught his eye, nobody stopped him for a chat or shouted his name above the din, and everybody knew where he was going. The metal stairs up to the Floor Manager's office resonated to the sound of his steel capped shoes and the metal door to the office opened with the same strained stiffness it always had, it just hadn't bothered him before.

Frank, come in, sit down.The manager's familiar voice greeted him.

I'll stand,he replied, more forcefully than he'd ever dared speak to authority before.

I understand. The words were wrapped in a sigh. Frank. You know we'd keep you if we could; keeping skilled men is what we're all about.

Let's get on with it. When do I finish?

We have to give you a fortnights notice Frank. We'll take care of all the details....
The haze came down again, the words lost as he turned and walked back down the steps to the shop floor. The union steward stepped between him and the door and tried to intervene, but he'd never had much to do with unions and brushed passed him.

     That was it, the end of a life of service. Anger passed fleetingly across his drawn forehead, not settling long enough to leave an imprint though, his army training had taught him not to show emotion in front of men.  All his life he'd struggled against the threat of poverty, not then, nor now would he let it beat him. He lifted his head and stepped back onto the shop floor, back into the world that was most familiar to him. He was a Labour man since he'd cast his first vote, and now they'd betrayed him. He didn't stay beyond picking up his sandwich box and beret. The wooden door swung open one more time as the sun rose above the roof tops around the plant. It occurred to him that this was the first time he'd seen it rising like this in many years. By now he'd normally have been at his machine for at least half an hour and the sun was always going down when the shift finished. He placed the beret onto his head and smoothed it into place. Without turning back he walked away, no one called him back, and no one noticed he'd gone.



     Through all the turmoil, The Thames lapped religiously against its muddy shores, marking time with the tides, impervious to change and erosion. Lap, lap, lap, it drummed out its rhythm, oblivious to the desperate times now reflected on its surface. The great waterway, the place he'd come to as a boy, was no longer dark and cold, but a mirror to the flaming dance of hell that had gone on in his mind.

     Above the river a gentle breeze pushed the tide up towards Parliament. Early morning was still lingering above the offices of huge conglomerates, bouncing off the glass exteriors that rose skyward attempting to touch the wisps of white clouds. Every so often a bird danced across the skyline and etched a dark silhouette against the pale dawn. The streets were waking now with traders and salesmen racing against time to beat the rush hour traffic. He walked at a brisk pace, a habit from his army days, his arms swinging smartly in a strong, steady stride. A car had never stood outside the house, if he couldn't walk or catch a bus somewhere, he didn't go. He was a young man” again,

Mornin.The voice came from the shop door in front of him. It was a stranger's voice and for the first time in his life he ignored another man's greeting. It was well known that no one had a bad word to say against him, and he'd never as much as sworn in front of friends. He strode on; his head was clear now. The flames of anger that had been torturing him, the destruction of his life, and the memories that had tormented him disappeared. The steady tapping of his work shoes on the concrete once again rapped out the rhythm of his walk, the beat of his life. He crossed the road and set foot on the grass verge lining the riverbank, never missing a step. In a few hours' time a thousand other footsteps would leave their mark on the earth and cover all trace of his existence. The footsteps of people who would never know his name, never know he was my hero.

Without faltering or looking back, without deviating from his fate or ever showing fear, my father, my hero, simply walked into the Thames.

Authentic Sex...his truth and hers

AUTHENTIC SEX?

MARK’S TRUTH

"How can you? She's a prostitute!”
The anger in her voice slapped him more violently. 
He had no answer, or none that would have made sense. 
"Answer me!" "Answer me!" The second command louder than the first and her eyes bulged, "ANSWER ME!"

 She launched headlong into him slapping and screaming while he took every blow without defence.
"This is the first contact we've had in a month" was the only thought that crossed his mind as he stood there. "We've been married fourteen years and this is the first time you've touched me in weeks." was his silent thought, the unspoken words lost as he covered his face now against the blows.
He'd known it couldn't last. The lies. The new "business" trips to London and the late nights. It wasn't so much the lack of sex that had driven him to despair. Jenny had stopped talking to him, stopped even arguing with him.

 How many times had he said to himself "I don't think I can go on?" How many times had he wanted connection again? Authentic connection.  Her website attracted him. Her face attracted him and her message attracted him. Her voice on the phone attracted him. Mark could speak the truth.

CANDICE’S TRUTH

 Candice kept watch from her bay window, checked her table-clock and made sure her room was presentable. The mattress on the four poster was new and the duvet clean and freshly laid. The pillows fluffed and the sheets crisp.

 The sun light entered the room and sparkled on the porcelain roses draped around the rail which held the silk drapes above the bed. The aura around her was a reminder that she was more than a sex worker, she was a counsellor and a relaxation therapist. Men came to her because she was an intelligent conversationalist, an artist and a passionate companion. She knew the rules of her position and she knew the ways to put a man at ease. And sex? She knew how to perform sex in many different ways, in many positions, but always in control.

 She would place her hand on his shoulder to turn him slightly towards her, bring him closer and place her arms around his hips. When he turned, he would be met with a smile that excited him, assured him of the hour he was about to spend with her. Never had the man turned away or faltered, never thought of anything other than meeting her lips gently as a greeting. She'd rarely had a man grab at her or act roughly when she did this. It was a skill, a way of connecting in a physical and an emotional way without over stimulating the client.
 It set the man at ease and allowed her to focus on pleasing him.
Candice brought men to life. For an hour at least they could talk freely, be themselves and enjoy her body. This was her truth

 It was a dance she,and one men enjoyed.

A Kibbutz at War...and picking melons

A Kibbutz at war...melons by the truckload!

   It was 4 am and we were ready for work. Tractors were already fired up waiting to take us to the melon fields below Kibbutz Grofit. Even at this time of the morning it was warmer than I'd experienced in England.

"This is a ripe melon" our driver told us," as he plucked a melon and threw the fruit into the box behind the tractor. “This one is not!” It just took more effort to separate the fruit from the vine. We stood in the Negev Desert, surrounded by green fields .It was the first day for volunteers in the fields.

   The engines roared again and the day began. We followed them along the first row, bent over, testing, picking and tossing little balls into the box.
I guess the important words there were "bent over". At the end of our first row we all straightened up while the tractors turned for the next row." Was the creaking from the tractors' gears, or from our joints?" They both sounded the same. Most of us were city kids in the fields for the first time. The work was hard but over the next few hours friendships were made that would last forty years and more.

"While I turn around, you can take a melon slice each" the driver told us.

   We needed no second directive to quench our thirst, splitting open the fruit and sharing the flesh and juice. That simple act brought us all together. There was also another consequence.
Did anyone ever tell you that melons were a laxative?
I didn't know that, and by the look of the number of people disappearing into the hedges as time wore on, neither did the others. One by one we disappeared into the bushes, thankful for the paper towels hung over the tractor seats to wipe the sweat away.
It was an experience we soon became accustomed to and managed to control.

   Each day the rota was the same:

  • 8 am backup to the Kibbutz for breakfast.
  • 9 am to the fields for more picking until Midday.
  • 12 pm the sun was too hot to work in so we slept.
  • 3 pm back to the fields to tidy up and load the melons onto transport.
  • Then at 5 pm it was back to the kibbutz to wash ready for dinner.
  • After that the time was our own until midnight.


Why is this memorable?

It was October 1973..seven days after the Yom Kippur War began. Israel was at war. The kibbutz was at war. We were at war. We had volunteered to become kibbutzniks. We became soldiers. 
The mixing of young people can be fun, seeing the sights amazing. But be prepared to work hard. Hopefully you will not be at war,


                                                                                                                                                                   

A Banner Day for Writing...reconnecting with my soul mate...

A Banner Day for Writing…reconnecting to my soul mate after 36 years

The Dating Game..the writing game

   June 2004: Searching Google, I came across an article about the American election  between George Bush and John Kerry and, because from a very early age I'd had the desire to learn more about the United States of America I read on and entered a four lines of my own views as an interested bystander from across the water. Four lines that changed my life.
In 1964 we'd been asked to choose a country for pen friends. Most of my class mates chose Europe. For me, even then, there was only the thought of being in America. Of being American. I wrote an introduction which, if I remember rightly wouldn't even be classed as a decent bio nowadays, but waited in anticipation for a connection from the States. You know that it could have been from anywhere within those enormous boundaries, but fortunately for me it came from the great state of Minnesota.
1968 and the cruel visit.
   I'd visited Minnesota for the first time in 1968  to stay with you and fallen in love. In fact the visit just confirmed what I'd known since our first letter to each other We'd been writing for three years and they carried a deep love and respect for each other over thousands of miles. Now, finally we were meeting face to face. But it wasn't just the lady I fell in love with, it was St Paul/Minneapolis. We were two people, in the Twin Cities, joined by writing, people who knew little about each other's background or each other's mindset. But people who had no idea where this first visit would lead. On the first evening, as we sat on the playground roundabout I kissed you and the unknown traumas of your childhood came back to haunt our relationship. From that moment on our lives changed.

   The remaining three weeks became simply a visit between two strangers, except one of the strangers was falling deeply in love with the other. I remember the detached visits we made. The swim in the lake under the stars, though your cousin was there. The school dance where we left separately and your cousin was there. The day I dived into the St Croix River. But your cousin was there.

   On the last night together I knew I had to face you and make my love known. I stood outside your bedroom going over the next few steps in my mind, asking some higher guide for advice. Was I praying? If you'd asked me then I would have said Yes! Now No. I was simply stealing myself to go through the next few moments. I took those steps and walked over the threshold between us.
“I love you.” I said, with my eyes closed.
“I know.” You replied, almost coldly.
It must have been a few seconds, but it felt like a lifetime. I walked out of the room, up the stairs to bed and the next day said goodbye to the girl I'd loved.

The Gipsy Teller...

    Back in England I decided to visit Stratford On Avon for a fair which closed the streets to traffic. I'd sent one more letter to you but not bothered again. The love had “died” and I had the rest of my life to mess up. I missed Minnesota but not the girl I'd treasured for so many years, or so I thought.

“Tell Your Fortune” read the banner outside a gipsy caravan. You know, I'm not sure even now what made me go up the steps and enter the dark inner confines of her home. But as I sat down I was in her world.

“Cross my palm” she told me. It was an order more than a request.“Make a wish”

I closed my eyes and to myself asked for “one more chance to see Linda” and opened my eyes.

“You thought of someone many miles away. Across water. Your wish will come true.”

I can't remember my reaction in the caravan. I just stood and walked back into the light and noise of a street party running on a major scale.
“What rubbish” I concluded and ordered the first of a few pints of beer that day. The incident disappeared into a haze and was forgotten.

   Over the years I'd thought about you on a few occasions. But there was no way of finding out  your whereabouts. I'd written to your address, Blair Avenue, St Paul, but received nothing in return. The love must have been there I suppose, but with no internet at the time you slipped in and out of consciousness, as one relationship passed into another and we both got older.

2004 and the beginning..

   In 2004 I was on Google as an article appeared on the American election and I gave four lines of my own particular beliefs. Four lines that were written and then forgotten. I wrote about John Kerry's defence of “climate change,” Not Earth shattering but I wrote it and signed off, a few lines drifting off in cyberspace. That's how it remained until I clicked onto Google again searching for an old website of mine that had disappeared from the business world. I saw the old four lines reappear again as my last entry to the site. I read them and smiled at the idea that anyone was even mildly interested in my thoughts. For some reason, my eyes went to the next box, to this day I can't explain why.

“This is not a political message. Are you Ernie Boxall from Attleborough, Nuneaton. I was your pen friend 36 years ago.” Just over twenty words that were to change my life.

   Those words excited me and frustrated me because there was no way of getting back to you, no way of reconnecting. Someone suggested contacting Google direct, which I did, and spent the week on my E mails waiting to see if I'd been successful. Day after day I watched and waited with all the memories of the time we'd spent together flooding back, and positive that because you'd written those words you must have put my name into your computer. I must have been on your mind.

“Ernie, this is a BANNER DAY.” The headline screamed at me and my heart leapt at the words. I had found my love again after thirty six years. I'd rarely felt so elated or so overwhelmed. 

Do you remember my phone call? A male voice answered and my heart sank. Should I ask for you or hang up? What would your husband think?

“Is Linda home?”

“Maam. It's for you.”

   Hope sprang again. It was you son. I think you may have asked him, who it was. I can't remember though. Your voice came over the wire and it was the happiest of sounds. My heart thumped.
We talked for a while and I joked that I was afraid I'd spoken to your husband, hoping I guess that you'd say “No, I'm not married.” But, you were! You are!

   No matter, we talked and the years rolled away, the words flowed unbroken. A few days. A few weeks. A few years. We talked. The days slipped by and thanks to the wonders of the internet it didn't take a week for us to connect any more. Your first E mail arrived and showed that while much of what had gone before had, for a number of reasons slipped from your memory, my love for you had not.

   Amongst your first words were an apology for the way you had treated me, words which were not necessary. You had nothing to apologise for. I wrote and told you about my trip to the gypsy and my wish, a wish which I now knew could be made good. I thought of that Gipsy and wished I could have returned to thank her.

2007 and a new beginning...

   In that first visit , you had looked like an angel, just over five feet tall, your face shaped angularly with chiselled cheekbones and a slender nose, Your lips were full and red, your  eyes were  at once dark and brooding and then alive. They carried the smile from your full mouth across a face framed by long dark hair. You were slender. In a beautiful way, not forced by fashion or diet, with naturally shapely legs and hips which showed off perfect breasts. You were eighteen going on twenty eight with top honours and a singing voice to melt the hearts of the hardest of men.

   Now, in that same airport thirty six years later I set eyes on you again and my heart swelled. I think you recognised me first. You appeared from the side of a man, I was to meet soon as your husband.  But I only had eyes for you and the desire to hug you for the whole of the three weeks was so powerful. It ended too quickly as you pulled away and introduced me to Dan. It was Deja vu all over again as he took the place of your parents. I mumbled my thanks for the hospitality I was about to receive, but all the time my thoughts were on the lady between us. Less shy now, we talked pretty much all the way back along one of the huge highways.

   You'd moved from a small avenue house next to a corner bar into a home as individual as you are. Do you remember? Perhaps not! That as we entered the drive and moved slowly towards the gate and the back of the house we passed the sacred tree, the Willow after whom you'd  taken my nickname.. The gate shut and once more after over thirty six years I walked into the house of the woman I loved.                                     

Peace At Last...my mother's message from beyond?

Peace At Last

“At last. I’m home and peaceful.”

The church is a still a simple building but nothing very much has changed since we got married here.

“Perhaps it has been painted! Yes it’s been painted hasn't it?”

You can smile and nod, I don’t think you are really that interested.

I love the way the sunlight filters down onto the pews and into the centre of the aisles. All my friends and family sitting there. All the people from my past, look at them. Well those I’ve not outlived anyway. It was lovely meet my sisters, mother and dad again. We talked over the times we had been apart. But down there. Look, down on the wooden pews are the people I've left now.

"There's not as many as I would have liked. But enough of those I cared about."

“Who are shedding tears?”

Let’s see. There are my grandchildren. It was always good to see them when I was alive, and it does a spirit’s heart good to see the tears on their cheeks. There’s Nicola and Naomi. Yes, I can see the sadness in their faces, they have been crying already. It shows.

“How about Carol?” It’s nice to see she came and with her husband and daughter, but no tears there. I know she’s had her problems and her Dad didn't help"

“Where is he?”
Ah yes front row, and in a suit.

“Still doesn't fit well Ernie!”

He never did wear clothes well. But I can see a tear in his eye. I wonder if he knows that I know he kissed me on the forehead before I died. We had our trials over the years but you were good.
“He’ll never know that I heard what he said about me dying and it being time to come and see you.”

“Well I wasn't ready then. Yes. I know I looked a mess in the bed and I know he’s been telling everyone I looked more peaceful when I was lying in the funeral parlour.”
There’s a reason for that son. I didn't enjoy my life all that much. But I'm feeling much better now.

“Not as close to me as he was to you love.”

“Oh you always did stand up for him.”

“But at least he’s looking smart.”

“And Ron and the family, how lovely they look. Don’t you think?”

No tears from you son, not that I can see anyway. But that’s OK you were away a long time and we didn't see much of each other did we?

“Ah well. Good to see you all on this fine day. But if you don’t mind. I won’t stay around till the end. The priest has said his words. There’s plenty to get on with here.”

You all have a good wake and get on with your lives. Look after those children and since I can’t keep the grave tidy I’ll expect one of you to do it.


“Goodbye. For now!”

Saturday, 15 August 2015

6 Rounds Of Championship Writing

6 Rounds Of Championship Writing...  

Round One:
 No one who steps through the ropes of a boxing ring is a coward. You might not be a very good boxer, but once you put a foot inside those ropes no one has the right to call you a coward. You face an opponent who has trained as hard as you have and has the same desire you have. Will he punish your mistakes or will you punish his.

No one who sits down at a desk and puts that first word down on paper is a coward, they may never finish a fight with a completed manuscript, but the act of stepping into the arena sets you apart from most of society. You have shown up for the fight. You have entered the ring with an opponent determined to grind you down, punish your mistakes and slip away from your best sentences. An opponent who defeats more writers than defeat it.

Round Two:
The hardest part of training is getting out of the chair. Most boxers would rather fight than train. Training is hard, sick inducing, gut wrenching physical torture. But no matter how hard it is the hardest part is often getting out of the chair to get to the gym. “I’ll just….” “After I finish…” “Just one more….”

The hardest part of writing is often sitting down in the chair. Writing the first sentences of the morning can be just as hard and gut wrenching, because in this case the opponent is a keyboard or even a blank piece of paper. Many budding writers can find a hundred things to do before they sit down in the chair and take that first look at the page. The cup of coffee, the e mail, the research.

Round Three:
Once in the gym the boxer is committed to 60-90-120 minutes of hard work. Each section of the work is pre planned and subject only to the clock. 6 x 2 minute skipping with 30 second breaks: 3 x 1 minute on the Heavy bag and 30 seconds break: Sparring 6 x 3 minute rounds with a minutes rest. The boxer’s session is totally under control. 

The professional writer has the same discipline each day they show up at the desk is a session set around the clock or around a pre set number of words. 6 x 500 words or 5 hours of writing with occasional breaks. Write a few hundred words without stopping, without thinking, without editing. Write for two hours until the mental sweat drips from your brow and then come again for another two hours after lunch. Drag yourself into the writing room ready to face the same torture.

Round Four:
Every boxer has a trainer. An older figure with experience of the fight game and how to become a better fighter than you were when you first walked up those rickety stairs and opened the door into the sweat stained, liniment smelling room. The trainer knows your every strength and weakness and decides on what to work on in any specific session. 

Most writers have a mentor whether physical or virtual. Someone you can turn to for guidance throughout your career, someone who not only knows your strength of writing but also your weaknesses. Someone who can say today we’re going to work on your characters, your plot, your ending. Someone who has written the book; someone who has published the book and worn the T Shirt.

Round Five:
Every boxer has a manager. Someone who can organize the fights, the venues, the fees and the opponents. The manager makes sure the boxer is being trained by the right trainer, gets the right opponent in the right location and for the right price to advance the career. Or is the fighter forever on the undercard of grimy back street halls being produced as fodder for young up and comers.

The writer has an agent or is self-managed. The criteria is the same. Are you following the structure set by your mentor? Are you in the right place at the right time to complete a project? Are you being booked into the right book signing events or the right market for your style of writing? Are you asking for the right fees? Is your writing career following a structured path or are you forever receiving "No" in reply to agents.

Round Six:
Fight Night:
The big night. All the preparation has been done the manager has set the fee for the fight and the trainer has prepared the fighter to the best of their ability and the venue is ready. The fighter leaves the dressing room, gloved up and in their own particular favourite clothes. The music plays as they make their  way to the ring and the ropes appear. The crowd cheer their encouragement as the fighter climbs through the ropes and begins to dance around the ring. Their opponent appears and makes the same journey. In the ring they face each other as the referee gives them the final rules of battle. The bell rings.

The author has prepared for the session, the writing room awaits but first there is the final self-instruction, the pens and paper with notes and mind mapped ideas. Dressed for work the author waits at the door of the study. The crowd in the head, the encouragement of the mentor in the ears, the author steps over the threshold and moves to the centre of the room where the desk and writing machinery wait. The final instructions of battle: Where’s the conflict? Who’s the protagonist? What’s the plot? The author sits, stares the screen and keys squarely in the eyes and throws the first punch.

The keys click and battle commences. 

Thursday, 13 August 2015

ErnieBoxall/ Native Progress/ One Spirit